I walked hand in hand with you,
I spoke eye to eye.
You were scared to loose me,
But now, look what's happened!
Rest is History, eh??
I sit in a semi-dark room, with a candle light.
But you know, it does not hide my tears...
I flirt with that flame now...
the flame of Seduction and false claims...
I don't know why, i think i still love you!
But passing by, i realize...
The mistakes I made, the promises i broke , the friends i lost,
And you know the rest.
My soul was on sale and you named a price!
No, no. no leave me alone!
I bleed in pain,in love; i don't mind!
I remember those first words you spoke,
They blew my mind, alright!
But passing by, i realize...
The mistakes I made, the promises i broke , the friends i lost,
And you know the rest.
My soul was on sale and you named a price!
Still, in my mind....
My lips are always on yours...
And that's enough a thought to live by...
So passing by....
wow its really good one...guess the person whom you love shld read this...lol its not pathetic plzzzzz change the title man!!
ReplyDeleterash
da person i love is blind lol...am paying for his treatment:P thanks a lot!!!
ReplyDeleteI was just passing by and stumbled upon your blog... very nice poem. Love this line: "My soul was on sale and you named a price!"
ReplyDeleterilly a nice poem ash -passing by!!!...i rilly love da second para-dat flirting with da flame...and da most amazing line is "my soul was on sale and u named a price"...rilly meaningful, fantastic line...dis poem rilly brings out dat sadness of wat a person goes thru missing his loved one...
ReplyDeleteanki...
i can see an awesome structurisation in ya poem....duno if twas intentional o nt tho.....luvly poem...openly written fr a blind person !!!
ReplyDelete:) thank u shobhi!!
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